Saturday, November 3, 2012

Just Write Competition

I submitted the following poem to Just Write:

Guilty eyes
Upon a guiltless man
Hearing the mother cry,
He’s eternally damned.

He looks down as she goes by
He has shattered her world
His actions cannot be rectified.
She turns and speaks her first words:

‘Go to hell’ she hisses
Her eyes screaming blame
She’s then gracefully dismissed
Her baby’s death was not his aim.

He begins his exit
Numb to his very core
Her words had hit him even
Harder than the courthouse door.

He walks out a ‘free man’
Lawyers are congratulated
This was not his life plan
Everything’s been complicated

Reporters surround him now
Is this what freedom feels like?
An escape he is not allowed
They all look alike.

‘No comment’ is mumbled
Through his weary lips
His spirit begins to crumble
His heavy heart’s been ripped.

He thinks of the flawless girl
Her face lifeless and still
The night’s events unfurl.
She should not have been killed.

He drove his truck
Headlights so bright
She was high on her luck:
Not meant to be out that night.

He casually changed the station
Wistful blues poured on through.
She focused on her presentation
And gazed in the mirror, while driving too.

Tires squealed.
And horns blared.
His vision is real.
He was there.

Through the crash he blacked-out
He now remembers only
His attempts to switch routes.
But it was not meant to be.

Guilt for the guiltless
This is where he lies
Who said freedom was painless?
To the girl he is forever tied.

I just found out I won 3rd place with the poem above! :) 

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